New poem 21/10/2010

I've been working on this poem for about a week now and finally have it finished, I will warn you it's alittle on the dark side. I wanted to mix the two extreams of romantic love and horror, I hope I have managed it.
I'll let you all deside.

True Love

I immerse my metal within you,

Sweaty guttural screams convey a sense of mortal purpose,

Sleek skin covers your throat,

Carved perfectly,

For my fingers alone,

Do you realize I had this knife,

Crafted,

For you?

Inscribed "love is the slice you leave behind",

For these moments you are the centre,

All sound and motion flow from you,

Face to face,

My eyelashes entwined with yours,

Your destiny beautifully realized in a single moment,

I inhale your last breath,

This is true love.